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① 情绪堆砌没层次?
很多同学写“She was sad”就完事，但高分答案会用“情绪+身体反应+环境烘托”三件套！比如：
?普通版：He felt disappointed.
?升级版：A wave of disappointment washed over him, his throat tightened, and the bustling cafeteria suddenly felt unbearably noisy.
② 高频陷阱词?
“happy”直接扣分！记住这些替换词库：
基础词 | 高分替换 | 适用场景 |
|---|---|---|
happy | radiant | 考试成功 |
sad | heartbroken | 亲人离世 |
angry | furious | 被误解 |
③ 必背金句模板?
绝望时刻：Her heart sank like a stone, every hope crumbling into dust.
惊喜反转：Tears welled up unexpectedly—this was the best birthday gift she’d ever imagined!
① 动作链公式?
“主动作+细节+结果”结构让句子秒变高级！比如：
He grabbed the letter（主动作）, his fingers trembling like autumn leaves（细节）, and read it through tear-blurred eyes（结果）.
② 高频动词库?
基础动词 | 高分替换 | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
run | sprinted | She sprinted across the field, heart pounding. |
cry | sobbed | He sobbed quietly, shoulders shaking. |
look | gazed | They gazed at the sunset, speechless. |
③ 连读技巧?
用分词结构合并动作，省字数又高级：
Hearing the bell ring（分词）, she rushed out（主句）, leaving her books scattered on the desk.
① 万能公式?
“感官+比喻+情绪暗示”三步法：
The moon hung low（感官）, its silver light wrapping the empty playground like a ghostly blanket（比喻）, amplifying her loneliness（情绪）.
② 场景速查表?
场景 | 必用词汇 | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
暴雨夜 | torrential rain, howling wind | Rain lashed against the windows, drowning out all other sounds. |
晨雾 | misty dawn, faint chirps | A lone bird’s chirp pierced the thick morning mist. |
③ 高频错误?
? The sun is shining.
? Golden sunlight filtered through the leaves, casting dappled shadows on the path.
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